Thank you to everyone who reviewed, the feedback is always appreciated whether good,bad or indifferent!
I was super pleased to see I just snuck into the daily top 5 too.
People who mentioned the game being more of a toy (that's what I see it as too - that and a cheeky way of delivering a poem) and perhaps needing more depth all have a fair point. I might well explore the mechanic in the future in a more substantial game but for the time being I have a few other games in development and this was more of a tasty morsel than a full-blown project.
ps the music is called 'Gustav'. I recorded it specifically for the game, it can be found here
cheers!